Sunday 1 September 2013

Joe's Fairy Tale

A long time ago a princess lived in a castle and a dragon took her to the...
cave.  The prince saved her.


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5 comments:

  1. Unknown1 September 2013 at 15:40

    I like that you did a picture plan Joe! Danika

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  2. Unknown1 September 2013 at 15:41

    I like that you tried to sound out a tricky word - 'saved'. Awesome writing Joe! - Dale

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  3. Unknown1 September 2013 at 15:42

    I liked how you tried tricky words with your word card. Ka pai Joe - Phoenix

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  4. Unknown1 September 2013 at 15:43

    I like your picture plan because it helped you remember what to write. Miller

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  5. Unknown1 September 2013 at 15:43

    I like your finger spaces in between your words. Maddie

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