Sunday 22 September 2013

Hannah's Writing - How to make my favourite sandwich


I am learning to write by myself

Success Criteria:

Remember to hear and write the first and last sounds of some words
First get the bread and the butter and the peanut butter.  Next spread the butter and the peanut butter.  After that cat the sandwich.  Finally eat it.

5 comments:

  1. She did a capital letter at the start of the sentence and a full stop at the end. Well done Hannah!

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  2. Well done for writing the first and last letters in words and trying some middle sounds too. Alex

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  3. Well done for doing finger spaces Hannah! Sophia

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  4. Well done Hannah for trying some tricky words like butter and peanut butter. Miller

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  5. Well done for doing a picture plan so you could use it for your writing. Ella

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