Welcome to Room 13's writing blog. We are a year 1 class at Clevedon School. This blog is a place where we can display our writing and give eachother feedback and feedforward. Feel free to add a positive comment about our writing!
Sunday 4 August 2013
Alex - White Sunday
On White Sunday in Samoa they cook underground in Samoa. It is an umu. Alex
She has done finger spaces - well done Alex. Dale
ReplyDeleteShe did two ideas! You are good at writing. Zara
ReplyDeleteYou did a capital for the last sentence. Well done Alex. Ella
ReplyDeleteYou did sound your letters out Alex. Awesome. Miller
ReplyDeleteDear Ella, Miller, Zara and Dale,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your feedback to Alex about her writing. You have really thought about what makes this piece of writing great. Well done!