Welcome to Room 13's writing blog. We are a year 1 class at Clevedon School. This blog is a place where we can display our writing and give eachother feedback and feedforward. Feel free to add a positive comment about our writing!
Monday 29 July 2013
Sophia's holiday
I went to Charlie's football and my favourite part was playing on the playground.
I like that she remembered finger spaces in between her words. Miller
ReplyDeleteI like that she had a full stop at the end of the sentence. Meg
ReplyDeleteSophia did a capital letter at the start of the sentence. Maddie
ReplyDeleteSophia remembered to do little letters in the middle of her sentence. Olivia
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