Welcome to Room 13's writing blog. We are a year 1 class at Clevedon School. This blog is a place where we can display our writing and give eachother feedback and feedforward. Feel free to add a positive comment about our writing!
Tuesday, 10 September 2013
Maddie's Writing - Why can we live on Earth?
We live on Earth because we have oxygen. We can breathe oxygen. Maddie
I like your writing because you did finger spaces in between your words. MIller
ReplyDeleteI like your picture plan because you drew the atmosphere and that is what you were writing about. Dale
ReplyDeleteMaddie did a full stop at the end of the sentence. Good job. Toby
ReplyDeleteGreat sounding out your words Maddie. Phoenix
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