Welcome to Room 13's writing blog. We are a year 1 class at Clevedon School. This blog is a place where we can display our writing and give eachother feedback and feedforward. Feel free to add a positive comment about our writing!
Wednesday 20 November 2013
Phoenix's writing - what uses water in my house?
The shower and teh taps use water at my home. Phoenix
You remembered a capital letter at the start of the sentence. Olivia
ReplyDeletePhoenix god job for remembering your full stop at the end of your sentence. Maddie
ReplyDeleteGood job for putting finger spaces in the middle of your words. Sophia
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