Welcome to Room 13's writing blog. We are a year 1 class at Clevedon School. This blog is a place where we can display our writing and give eachother feedback and feedforward. Feel free to add a positive comment about our writing!
Monday 10 June 2013
Molly's Writing
In the weekend I went to the pool. I had fun and the pool had one slide to go on and I went on it. I had fun and I fell asleep in the car. Molly
Molly did finger spaces - good job. Maddie
ReplyDeleteI like the colourful picture about the pools. Miller
ReplyDeleteI like her writing because she did a capital letter at the start of the sentence. Zara
ReplyDeleteI like her long story with 2 sentences. Leon
ReplyDeleteShe coloured in beautifully. Toby
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